I’m a Black Holeblack-hole

and I’m in your universe

What does that mean? I’ll tell you

I’ll eat you

I’ll devour you

Till there is nothing left

My ego destroys

You know that and I know it also

But we just can’t live

without one another

We hurt each other

We know of our imminent death

but in our hearts

(or what is left of it)

being far from one another

is not worth living

So let death come, my little star,

we will live the best of what is left

up to the ultimate moment


by José Ruy Pimentel de Castro


~ by joseruypc on July 24, 2009.

5 Responses to “BLACK HOLE”

  1. love your way of seeing yourself as a black hole, playful and pleasant read…

    perfect for poetry potluck!

  2. A great description of a toxic relationship…they are mighty powerful!

  3. Thought provoking but sadly oh so true…great poem and thanks so much for linking with Potluck xx

  4. very exciting poem, unusual use of reality, well written 🙂

  5. support us by visiting a few poets near your entry.
    thanks for the contribution…

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