IV
I’ve blown a kiss
to the wind
wishing it would be led
to wherever my beloved one
might be
It was first carried
by a tender breeze
having it slowly pass trees
and gently caress flowers
Being led to a more open field,
my kiss was lifted high
traveling through clouds,
overseeing castles and ordinary life
My kiss seemed to have no direction
when it was taken somewhere above the see.
Air currents fought for the present I’ve sent
taking it up and down the edge of cliffs,
its walls and its steadiness.
From then on I could not trace my kiss anymore.
The last thing I knew it had gained the sky
and if it does not reach its destination above it,
may at least the wind take parts of it
to every breathing lung there might be
wherever it is
that the wind can reach
by José Ruy Pimentel de Castro
hummm strong ending and the wind takes part of it love this so much well done
http://gatelesspassage.com/2011/09/19/my-world/
the force of wind will plant the seeds of love, it may blossom somewhere..
lovely entry.
great one jose- my gooseberry.. http://fiveloaf.wordpress.com/2010/02/16/helpless/
You give life and wings to the kiss. Very well done!
http://charleslmashburn.wordpress.com/2011/09/19/fragile-cloth-2/
beautiful expressions.
How are you today?
Happy end of November!
Appreciated your support to our poetry picnic,
Hope to see you share today,
A random poem or old poem will do the wonders too.
Your talent rocks.
Hope to see you in.
xoxox