II
She dresses up
with joy and expectancy
As she leaves her house
towards the sinuous
and mysterious,
narrow path,
entering the dense woods,
she lifts the edge of her dress
in order not to soil it
allowing her ankle to be seen
An only glance is able
to twist the head
of an imaginative young man
who is as anxious as her own
He leaves his house
Desire pouring out
of his skin
Will she be waiting for him
in the same place as yesterday?
As he approaches the location
a familiar hand comes from the left
between some vegetation
and pulls the base of his head
He falls hard
above a female’s body;
a body he knew very well
and could only touch,
and press,
as his heart beat quickened
due to the hot kisses they shared
Time, then, starts its playful games
distorting its own passing
The ground seems each time (?) damper
The air seems as humid as the leaves
they now lay above
It is difficult for them to refrain
from moaning their love aloud
even though there might be
daily morning walkers
passing by
As time comes,
it comes with satisfaction
and whispers of love
to one another
They pick up their Victorian clothes
unfortunately dressing them up again
They shouldn’t be seen together
so they decide to see each other again
the next week
for precaution
If only they could keep their promise
they wouldn’t be here today
for they combined the same thing
a day before
Tomorrow, probably,
two young people
will be out in the woods again
by José Ruy Pimentel de Castro

Glad to see you in.
smiles.
Glad to see happy/love born out of long time relation.
keep writing…
So romantic =)
The way you expressed this sensual piece is beautiful.
Thank you so much for sharing.
awesome.
Happy Birthday….come join poets rally if you wish.
stay blessed.
keep it up.
Sensual and romantic and finely wrought. Nice work!
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Brilliant and masterful use of poetic words. It’s both sensual and passionate. Very well written. It can be “felt”.
Bryan Miller